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Re: Jay (temporary title)
Holy Shibboleth! You're only 11 and you wrote this?!?! *said with seething admiration* That's better than I write! :shock:
May 15, 2006 -
Re: The Sunset
Liked this very much, IceCreamMan! Gorgeous images, but it seemed to end a little abruptly. I wanted to keep reading! :twisted:
May 15, 2006 -
Re: 4'33"
Hooyah, IceCreamMan. That was brilliant! I really loved it - and I know what you mean by the silence in piano being the little moment in time where you get ...
May 13, 2006 -
Re: come in and find out
Well in that case, IceCreamMan, you are in for a boatload of favorite songs. Close to the Edge is awesome! thinglikegod - my dad likes Metallica ^_^
May 13, 2006 -
Re: Poetry
Well, I sorta think that people should write whatever they're inspired to write. That seems fair to me; if you want to be a poet, well - silly - write ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Detention with Miss E
This was SO SO SO SO SO SO good!!!! Get the rights from your friend and make an anthology of these. God, I love Miss E's misadventures! ^_^
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Poor Little Ingrid
Reas- YOU PIG MONKEY, YOU STOLE MY SAILBOAT!!!!! _/) Anyway, Colier, I do apologize if I've offended you, all I'm saying is that I don't care for the style.
May 11, 2006 -
Re: The Confrontation
Whoa. Hmmm... What to say? I really liked the way this was written, I really liked the characterization (VG on that), but perhaps you could have streched it out a ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Bereft - This goodnight's kiss
Very very very good. Gorgeous, beautiful. (Did I mention pretty?) Just one question. *grins* You don't happen to like writing 'long lost love/current i love you' poems and the like, ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: A Prayer
Uhhhh... you had really intruiging images but I am so confused ... 8-[ I have no clue what's going on.
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Poor Little Ingrid
This had a good premise, but it sort of died by the end, like you just wanted to get the ending over and done with. The idea was fantastic, but ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind and Darkness: Draft One [1-3]: Closed
*grins* Long sentences do seem to be my call sign, don't they? It's like piano, you know you shouldn't play the song fast and you know you'll likely mess it ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: The Order of Atlantis: Rise of the Shadows (Ch.1,2,3,4!)
I thought this was pretty good, but I do agree wth Duskglimmer on some things. Pretty decent premise, but some of the character's reactions - at the movies, for example ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: come in and find out
Hi there. I would say welcome and nice to meet you, but, lol, I'm pretty sure we've already been introuduced. :smt025 (I just listened to Heart of the Sunrise again. ...
May 10, 2006 -
Re: Little Girl, Not a Little Girl
This was wonderful. I really loved it, well written; very well done. :D
May 10, 2006